The Submission by Amy Waldman Reviewed by Dindy

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The inconceivable happened – a terrorist attack on U.S. soil – and two years later it is compounded in Amy Waldman’s debut novel, The Submission.  A Muslim-American architect is anonymously selected to design the World Trade Center memorial evoking moral and ethical dilemmas portrayed clearly and vividly by Waldman.

The Submission by Amy Waldman

A jury comprised of artists, government officials, philanthropists, and Claire Burwell, the only member representing the families of the dead, have rigorously reviewed 5,000 applications for the tribute at Ground Zero.  Each jury member is defined and positioned within the story through dialogue and spare but revealing description during intense deliberations escalating after the winner is selected based on his proposal and renderings.

“It’s absolutely unconscionable to say he should be denied if he won,” says a juror [19] of Mohammad Khan whose appropriateness for the commission is challenged.  A non-practicing Muslim, Khan was born in Virginia and emphasizes this when he is detained without cause at the airport.  Waiting to be released he reviews his minor sins – ignoring the speed limit, over-deducting on his taxes and shoplifting a candy bar as a child.  “His effort to avoid being seen as a criminal was making him act like one, feel like one.”  [27] Continue reading

What the Heart Knows Reviewed by Dindy for Foreword Reviews

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What the Heart Knows is an upbeat novel, billed by the author as “small town fiction,” and the first book of Purl’s Milford-Haven series.

The book opens powerfully with the appearance of the first of many strongly developed characters, Christine Christian. A television reporter, Christian is lured to the construction site of a controversial mansion-to-be with the promise of the inside scoop. Her fate remains unanswered in the pages that follow, until the reader discovers the prologue for book two generously included at the close of book one. Teasing mentions of the reporter keep one reading to find the answer.

What the Heart Knows is set in the mid-1990s, before the tidal wave of personal technology devices, social media, and the need to be “connected” 24/7. Purl does not use external paraphernalia to bring her characters to life. Instead, she creates genuine relationships that make sense within the story; each character has a clear set of goals and morals, all served up through dialogue and inner thought processes. Sound old-fashioned? It is. The author puts in the work so the reader does not need to Google each reference to stay on top of the story.

In a time of high unemployment and the resulting panic, it is also a pleasure to encounter characters that have profitable businesses and strong careers. Each person evolves through insightful internal dialogue written by the author and “spoken” during times when the characters are alone, reflective, and seriously mulling over their current situations and future plans.

Miranda the artist pokes through the cast as the most likable of the crew. She is creative, outdoorsy, and very concerned with the environment and animal welfare. Her thoughts while painting, sketching, or considering her work bring the reader deep inside her psyche and illuminate her seascapes and animal portraits. Of a cheetah named Lia who waits on the easel to be completed, Miranda says, “My job is to reveal her spirit, not to encase her in paint.” This simple sentence conveys the values and vision of the artist both in her work and her life.

Sally O’Mally is the owner of the local breakfast spot where the residents of Milford-Haven meet for heart-to-heart conversations, drool over cinnamon buns, and catch up on local gossip. She is the most boisterous character, a smiling, seemingly happy woman. However, Sally harbors secrets, often spilling them out before she realizes she has opened her mouth. Her bubbly demeanor belies her sadness. Sally is involved in a clandestine affair with Jack Sawyer, the contractor for the mansion that is the plague of this otherwise idyllic coastal town. Sally wants the town to know about the romance, particularly when she learns that Jack’s ex-wife is one of the well-respected locals.

The long roster of characters all have large roles in the story and the author kindly wrote a kind of glossary at the end of the book, including physical descriptions, jobs, and major ties to other characters. Multiple love stories, friendships, crushes, and storylines populate What the Heart Knows. The author keeps the romantic interactions to a PG-13 level, eschewing gratuitous sex, and nary an expletive muddies the dialogue.

Purl’s characters are well-traveled, educated, and street smart. While she indulges in some clichés and predictable moments, these are redeemed in subsequent pages. For a prequel of book two in the series, When Hummers Dream, visit the author’s website.

Author:  Mara Purl

Publisher: Bellekeep Books

ISBN#  978-1-936878-01-7

Follow Your Passion by Rochelle Melander

One of the perks of the public relations & marketing industry is that learning is part of the job -unlike the crossword puzzle one shoves under their desk when the boss walks by.  Writing Coach Rochelle Melander is my go-to-guru for working on my writing and she constantly reminds me that I am passionate about writing and how to keep the passion going and gives me a hearty laugh most days.  See her recent writing prompt, Fun With Creches – I’m still laughing and sharing it with friends.

Enjoys today’s guest post from Rochelle.

Follow Your Passion

By Rochelle Melander

Writing isn’t generally a lucrative source of income; only a few, exceptional writers reach the income levels associated with the best-sellers. Rather, most of us write because we can make a modest living, or even supplement our day jobs, doing something about which we feel passionately. Even at the worst of times, when nothing goes right, when the prose is clumsy and the ideas feel stale, at least we’re doing something that we genuinely love. There’s no other reason to work this hard, except that love. —Melissa Scott

Two years ago, my son introduced me to the guitarist and

composer Eric Johnson. Over the winter holiday, I watched

my 15-year-old son practice Eric Johnson’s piece, Cliffs of Dover,

on his electric guitar. Mornings, afternoons and evenings, he’d

rehearse the piece, working through the difficult passages

until he got them down.

Watching my son practice, I was impressed by the passion he brought to his music. Several years ago, when I was overwhelmed by work and not feeling terribly excited by any of it, my coach Carol Gerrish asked me, “If your business was destroyed by fire, what pieces of it would you want to include when you rebuilt it?”

That question has inspired me for years.

In this New Year, I am asking myself a similar question: “If a fire

destroyed all of your writing and you had to start over, what would

you write?” This year, dear readers, I am working hard to reconnect

with some of the writing I am most passionate about but have had

little time to do. For me, that means working on my book projects

for children.

What about you? What projects are you passionate enough to give

up a holiday vacation to work on? What project wakes you up in

the morning and keeps you up at night? What project excites you

so much that you can hardly help but talk about it? Put your energy

behind your passion—and it will keep you engaged!

Rochelle Melander, the Write Now! Coach, is the author of 10 books, a certified professional coach, and a popular speaker.   Write-A-Thon: Write Your Book in 26 Days (And Live to Tell About It) is the 10th book authored by Melander who teaches professionals how to write fast, get published, establish credibility, and navigate the new world of social media. In 2006, Rochelle founded Dream Keepers Writing Group, a program that teaches writing to at-risk tweens and teens.  Get your free subscription to her Write Now! Tips Ezine at http://www.writenowcoach.com and sign up to be a member of her Write Now! Mastermind class for professionals at http://www.writenowmastermind.com


An Exclusive Love by Johanna Adorjan

Johanna Adorjan 
Johanna Adorjan

Photo Credit: Peter von Felbert

An Exclusive Love by Johanna Adorján

“On 13 October 1991 my grandparents killed themselves,” the first sentence of An Exclusive Love, a memoir by Johanna Adorján grabs the reader and does not let go until the end. Reported without emotion – but not without beauty – as a news reporter does best, (Adorján is a cultural journalist), the reader immediately knows the ending but not the infinitesimal details, so worth paying attention to, of the path that leads one there.
Shocking to the reader, still reeling from the harsh beginning, is presented succinctly but no less forceful when Adorján recounts the final entry in the official folder of the suicide.  One last punch before book closes is from the Danish police file is the bill from the locksmith who opened the door of her grandparents’ home – $297 kroner.  The reader sees the door open and imagines the scene beyond it.
Grandparents are an enigma.  The tales they tell are often about our parents when they were young as if the near past was more important than decades that came before.  In An Exclusive Love we are privy to not only the author’s memories but also the intimate thoughts of people from each stage of her grandparents’ (Vera and Istvan) life.
The recent passing of Dr. Jack Kevorkian evokes the polarizing discussion of “death with dignity.”  Some called him “Dr. Death” and opposed his methods.  Some called him the “angel of mercy.”  The Federal Government has recused itself from the conversation and handed the reins to each state to determine if and when assisted suicide is legal.  A private matter and a private choice, Vera and Istvan did not ask permission from anyone but each other.
An Exclusive Love is a painful and engrossing detail of the day that Adorján’s grandparents acted on their suicide pact.  Throughout the memoir, the author stays gently in the background allowing her grandparents their contemporaries and family members to re-construct the days, hours, and minutes leading up to their mutual suicide in 1991.  Timing is everything and Adorján graciously inserts herself into the story calling forth her conversations and experiences with her beloved, mysterious forbears.
In the early 90s the Hemlock Society was operating covertly in the United States and its book, Final Exit was impossible to find except via the Internet.  Founded in 1980 by Derek Humphry, The Hemlock Society’s mission was to help people like his wife Jean and reform the laws about doctor-assisted suicide.
Aware of the book, Vera locates it, reads it and the suicide pact is in place.  Planned and painless at the end, quietly so that nobody would attempt to intervene, Vera and Istvan slip into the next realm together as they have been for decades.
A graceful shift into dialogue between her grandparents on the Sunday morning that is the focal point of the story shows a couple who have lived with and loved each for 50 years.  They survived the Holocaust and reconstructed their life – not obliterating the past – once settled in Copenhagen.
“She goes into the kitchen to wash the ashtrays she has collected from the guestroom and the front hall.  Everything must be neat and tidy.  She doesn’t want to cause any hassle.  No one must find her decision a nuisance.”  The grandmother’s internal dialogue continues to rend the readers’ heart.
Page after page the reader finds another snapshot of the day that causes tears to flood the page.  “You must say goodbye to each other now,” says Adorján’s grandmother.  The grandfather holding Mitzi, their dog, kisses her nose, strokes her head and squeaks out goodbye.
The beauty of An Exclusive Love is the twofold – the memory of the event and the words carefully selected to convey it.  In the tradition of Joan Didion’s 2007 memoir The Year of Magical Thinking, this intensely personal telling of exceptional love and loss is one to read over an over again reminding us why we read.  To find ourselves through the stories of others, find out why we are here and what we ultimately want for ourselves.
Adorján resides in Berlin and is an editor of the Allegemeine Zeitung’s culture section.  An Exclusive Love is her first book.  Based in the U.K., Anthea Bell is an award-winning translator of a range of work including W.G. Sebald’s Austerlitz and the Inkworld trilogy by Cornelia Funke.

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Nettie Parker’s Backyard

NETTIE PARKER’S BACKYARD

ForeWord Review
C.V. Smith’s protagonist in her novel Nettie Parker’s Backyard breaks with traditional book format, creating a three-dimensional adventure wherein she invites the reader directly into her story: “Why don’t you meet me there?” asks Halley. The second-person narration is one of the literary devices that Smith handles deftly throughout her book about intolerance throughout history, whether by race, religion, or disability.
The novel’s message cuts a wide swath, taking events from a global perspective to the personal experience of the heroine, Halley’s elderly neighbor, Nettie Parker. Shifting from Halley’s point of view to Aunt Nettie’s, the novel reaches back in time to the Middle Passage, the Holocaust, segregation in the US, and more. All are recounted in Nettie’s calm voice during an interview she gives to Halley for a history project.
The Middle Passage, as presented by Nettie, is a compelling and accurate history, relating the capture of Africans and the horrific conditions of the boats carrying them to the United States where they were sold into slavery. The details of this first leg of indentured servitude are not soft-pedaled for the young reader.
Segregation on the scale it once existed is incomprehensible to young people today. Nettie, exposes the reader to Martin Luther King, Jr. and other well-known events not well known to those born before the 1970s. Swinging back to the personal, Nettie tells Halley’s class of the humiliation she and her mother experienced during their annual shopping trip to Beaufort, South Carolina.
Nettie also speaks of her husband, Jonas, to focus on the history of the Tuskegee soldiers. Her telling illustrates that African-Americans were obviously deemed fit to fight in World War II, but nonetheless did not reap the benefits of white soldiers.
The novel continues to peel the layers of history from the horrors of the Holocaust to the celebration of Bar Mitzvah, a rite of passage for thirteen-year old Jewish children. Nettie’s stories about prejudice go beyond racism to detail the sub-standard treatment of physically challenged people.
“I wrote this book for children aged nine to twelve, the time when one questions everything,” says Smith. An educator for thirty years in the Los Angeles Unified School District, she worked with ESL and Special Education students and authored Stuff, an anthology of rap, poetry, and prose for children in crisis.
Dindy Yokel
August 3, 2011

Are you there Ms. Blume? It’s me, Dindy.

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Are you there Ms. Blume? It’s me, Dindy.

Margaret Simon and I have been friends for 36 years since Mrs. Feldman, the librarian at the now-defunct John F. Kennedy Elementary School, introduced us. I connected with Margaret, the glorious girl that you created and she showed me that I wasn’t alone. It clicked at that moment, I would be a writer and repay the kindness (pay it forward in hackneyed parlance).

Reading was (and is) my refuge, the perfect hiding place for a shy girl who was the first in sixth grade to get her period. How the entire grade found out I will never know, but news like this travels fast. Margaret was the gentle friend I needed at the time.

You made me laugh and cry, you gave me a friend and you gave me a career. For decades I have given your books, particularly “Are You There God? It’s Me, Margaret,” as gifts to young women who need a respite from the crazy, super sonic world. It is still one of my favorite gifts to give.

Ms. Blume, you inspired me to read and keep reading, to write and keep writing and I know you inspire those who I introduce to you and your creations.

Thank you for giving birth to Margaret and so many other realistic, hilarious and wise characters and stories.

Love, Dindy